I walk back to my bag have some food then we have to line up. I start to get nervous but it goes away because we had to what in line FOREVER! When we finally lined up at the start line. I was feeling tired but woke myself up by doing some stretches.( I was so happy I stretched I'm feeling no pain!) I had serious butterflies at this point. We had to wait at the start line for around 10 mins.
I kept my eyes on Miss Alloway who was holding the clapper.Then Miss Alloway suddenly said “ Are you ready? On your marks, get set ,CLAP! I ran into lead and around the cone that was the first of many corners. When I got into the forest that's when the stitch seriously kicked in. I felt like I was being stabbed. But I powered on knowing I was past halfway. When I got out of the forest I saw Marcus and Samuel entering. When I was on my last lap I looked back and saw Eb coming but I had the finish line in site.I sprinted to the finish knowing that I would get a rest. I went and saw my parents. I chatted to James. Then I had to go. When I headed home I was happy with my performance and excited because that was my last school cross country.
Nice post Lachlan you smashed in your race.
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DeleteWell done Lachlan, this is an entertaining read. You certainly have the audience hooked from the start and the twist adds to the desire to read on.
ReplyDeleteI don't know if you need this part "I went and saw my parents. I chatted to James. Then I had to go." Although I do like your use of short sentences.
Well done you should be super proud of your running! Goodluck at Rakahuri.
Thank you for the feedback. I will know for next time.
DeleteNice going good luck for the other runs
ReplyDeleteNice work Lachlan! You did great in cross country! Samuel and I were amazed that when we entered the forest you were out of it! Good luck for the next run!
ReplyDeleteYou did very well in cross country. You have a great piece of writing. Oh should b very proud of yourself.
ReplyDeleteCool good job nice writing!!!
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